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I don't know why,
I still break down and cry,
At times I find myself,
Wanting to shout out for help,
I want to tell you that I love you, but I don't know,
I just don't know if what we had before is possible,

I hope that you'll always remember me,
And the good times that came to be,
Forget the arguments and the fights,
Step out of the shadows and walk into the light,

Maybe one day we'll talk again,
Forgive each other for our sins,
Until then I'll hold it all in,
Because sometimes it takes two to begin,

Honestly, I just want this month to be over,
As days go by I can feel my heart grow colder,
This would've been two years together,
I really thought that it would go on forever,

My phone reminded me, said it would never end,
And when I read that, it dug deep under my skin,
But never is the longest 5 letter word,
Because now your voice may never be heard.
I will never forget.
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hitting home.
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HollowFactor Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
v_v this poem hurts like hell... It made my eyes water... cause this is exactly how i feel right now...
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:iconadvent317:
Advent317 Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry.
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HollowFactor Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its fine man I really like it
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BeautifulAdmiration Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love the line "but never is the longest 5 letter word".
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I agree and that last stanza is amzing
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Advent317 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I like that you picked out your favorite line.
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BeautifulAdmiration Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome. :)
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